| an Oath of Submission
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themolly
| I will obey as it has come to this | 1 |
it's become the high path above this | 2 |
the war fruit better be worth this- | 3 |
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lest | 4 |
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nothing is worth this. | 5 |
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22 Jun 05 |
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hmmm.
— unknown
like it, don't love it, work on it, i'll reread it.
— tiedtoes
I do! I like this! This is hmmm...I know what this is about I think.?.?.
— BoundFeet
clever poem
— bettalpha
thank you.
— unknown
What is war fruit? Never heard that before.
Submission of this poem? Nothing is worth this? Self critique or what?
— Isabelle5
You've never heard of the fruits of war? Really?
anywho...this is about submitting to your government. and no, nothing is worth it.
— themolly
AND HOW
— unknown
here-here!
— unknown
what's going on...?
— unknown
thanks
— unknown
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