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netsky epigram
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gravid woman while pre-partum
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gets a shot termed "epidural"
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by which to block off pain paths, neural
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gravid poet while pre-poem
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takes a shot termed "epi-dram"
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by which to unblock pain paths, dammed
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24 Jun 05

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LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!! GREAT!!! GREAT!!! GREAT!!!! and those aren't my granny pants talking.
 — BlueRock

Post partum poet, undammed and undimmed.

Lovely play on words.
 — Isabelle5

damn good shit.
damn good this.
o god damn this.
 — noodleman

Well what is there to say
 — larrylark

I revisited this from my favorites. Have you ever read something and loved it because it spoke of how you felt that moment or because it was the oppisite of what you were feeling and appreciated the diversity or simply because you were on drugs and loved everything, but then you come back to it and say "I must be on drugs or consider doing them because I don't see what I saw in this?" Well, this still tickles my granny parts (not pants...damm carpel tunnel) and I'm only 3 decades. My hypothalmus is angry with me. I love this..
 — BlueRock

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