| Pc message board idea jousters
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netskyIam
| Sabres crossing in the night in | 1 |
struggles they love more, these fights | 2 |
to pin or point | 3 |
at the other's chin; | 4 |
two feel alive, | 5 |
more in one skin | 6 |
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It is not just a phrasing: French | 7 |
and who does not ejaculate | 8 |
or thrill for that word "touche!" | 9 |
at fence? | 10 |
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25 Jun 05 |
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zorp!
— onklcrispy
ahaha--
— youthculture
heh.
— midare
A bit deep, can I get an explanation on this?
— Wix
Interestingidea -needs to be developed more
— larrylark
Wix: means that our heated discussions and plays on the board are really quite sexual at their root. As a horn-dog, myself I say: all interactions between spirited people are sexual sublimations. larrylark: Perhaps it is too short. I see your point. It's easy to get an idea but often hard to put into a form of just the right length. I shall try this poem at another board without the personalized title. I bet it will become shark chum! (grins and thanks, all) BUT! At this point I still prefer it in this brief form-- let it be a poem overtly about sex? Why not. In fact, it nearly is just that. -grins with thanks- reid
— netskyIam
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