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cows skins on sheeps skins
hank

the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walked past me
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the black leather jacket walk passed me
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Written while strolling Las Ramblas, Barcelona, Spain 2000

6 Jul 05

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mm.. obscure.
much praise.
 — midare

mm..can i have the praise?
 — hank

or the m&m's
 — hank

your poem about a place i walked in 2000 made me laugh.

i clog danced on a high stage with street puppets just off las ramblas.

you should have been there to catch me when i fell off rather than writing poetry.

'the poet passed on another day and i have the scar to prove it' i may later write.

were you at a terrace, did you write this on a paper souvenir?
 — kaleidazcope

i'm waiting for gnormal to chime in on this one.
 — hank

still waiting, i see.
 — Lia

hahahahahahaha! tits!
 — noodleman

thought you'd enjoy.
 — hank

i think i'll write a poem for hank
 — kaleidazcope

you weren't there a second ago
 — kaleidazcope

i've written one. now i'll edit.
 — kaleidazcope

Fix line 7 - walked...

It took me a long time to figure this out and now all I can say is HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Hank, you're all dry bones humor, aren't you?  grin
 — Isabelle5

Hmm...not very interesting. I think this is attempting to be more than it really is. 3/10
 — Henry

The black leather jacket walked past me; times six
the black leather jacket walk passed me; times one

minimalsim is better
 — unknown

thank you for your recent ratings.
 — hank

Your very welcome Hank.
 — Henry

I mean, "you're."
 — Henry

ah,

a vegetarian
who won't wear
leather

that's what he
meant with
his beautiful losers
 — banditfemme

maybe i get one.
 — hank

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