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pricking the poets' tight fantastic

an  early Gazebo entry
almost ensured my exit...
Precise and fussy carpet patterns
co-mingle, as in cliques
Now mind you ! lowly flea hop in,
or worse, trespassing puppy tick
Carpet cliques didact on tacks

18 Jul 05

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Great to see the lowly Gazebo in poetry, but I've never seen one indoors, usually they are erected outdoors on the grass.
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