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pricking the poets' tight fantastic
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an  early Gazebo entry
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almost ensured my exit...
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Precise and fussy carpet patterns
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co-mingle, as in cliques
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Now mind you ! lowly flea hop in,
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or worse, trespassing puppy tick
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Carpet cliques didact on tacks
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18 Jul 05


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Great to see the lowly Gazebo in poetry, but I've never seen one indoors, usually they are erected outdoors on the grass.
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