|poe bread verse (short, simple)
Bread must be yeasted
leavened and baked
Good bread is tasty
(-that- can never be faked)
If the bread's faulty
it rises then falls.
A poetry parable
is -this- flat bread, is all
26 Jul 05
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nice, cute, appealing (i like baking)
I like this. Netsky would fall in love with it.
ummm smells fresh...
very true.... decent poem.
ooooh noooo (I lol) -this is supposed to be an example of -flat, untasty bread!- and so, it parables -why- it falls flat. oooooo noooo you kids must not pump air back into an arid soufle. pooooof. am gone flat again! (grins and huggles) netRitz
there! I done fixed it so you know it's supposed to salt our lips ("a" instead of "like a", and dashes now bracket "this". no mistaking the one funny thing: to make a verse well about itself being "bad" is no mean trick.
I am strange. Someone hug me again. -grins-
clever! and at ease. i wrote a poem called "bread" once, but it was about eating it! I enjoyed the rise and yum of this poem!
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