| poe bread verse (short, simple)
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netskyIam
| Bread must be yeasted | 1 |
leavened and baked | 2 |
Good bread is tasty | 3 |
(-that- can never be faked) | 4 |
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If the bread's faulty | 5 |
it rises then falls. | 6 |
A poetry parable | 7 |
is -this- flat bread, is all | 8 |
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26 Jul 05 |
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nice, cute, appealing (i like baking)
— Lia
I like this. Netsky would fall in love with it.
— FangzOfFire
ummm smells fresh...
— feetfirst
very true.... decent poem.
— unknown
nice one!
— Wix
ooooh noooo (I lol) -this is supposed to be an example of -flat, untasty bread!- and so, it parables -why- it falls flat. oooooo noooo you kids must not pump air back into an arid soufle. pooooof. am gone flat again! (grins and huggles) netRitz
— netskyIam
there! I done fixed it so you know it's supposed to salt our lips ("a" instead of "like a", and dashes now bracket "this". no mistaking the one funny thing: to make a verse well about itself being "bad" is no mean trick.
I am strange. Someone hug me again. -grins-
— netskyIam
clever! and at ease. i wrote a poem called "bread" once, but it was about eating it! I enjoyed the rise and yum of this poem!
— misterpoet
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