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tiedtoes
| If silence is power | 1 |
and raving weakness | 2 |
I'm not shouting | 3 |
until I'm by myself | 4 |
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8 Aug 05 |
Rated 8.8 (8.3) by 11 users.
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so simple.so true
— unknown
word
— unknown
very nice. short, but absolutely meaningful
— unknown
wow. favorites. 10. i cant say anything else
— bear
thank you very much everyone
— unknown
nice. very very true. well done.
— sabz3003
Interesting little tid bit.
— InMyBlood
nice one...
— unknown
thanks guys
— tiedtoes
If silence is power
and screaming
weakness I'm not
shouting until
I'm by myself
would be interesting.
very good piece.
— noodleman
If silence is power and screaming weakness - no wonder I can't stand up half the time!
This is cute. Be sure aforbing isn't peeking through the windows when you do it, though! At poet is a stalker of the solitary events of others..wink
— Isabelle5
um...ok
— tiedtoes
Very nice
— BoundFeet
cute :)
— WildSymphony
thank you
— tiedtoes
brilliant
— unknown
this is more like a private revelation--
— themolly
so?
— tiedtoes
i like this
— tj
thankyou tj
— tiedtoes
Perfectly put
— unknown
thanks. I appreciate the compliment.
— tiedtoes
better. what did you change?
— unknown
It was the title!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i like this one even more.
FAV
— BoundFeet
hehe. counts me out. i definately talk to myself when no one's around. good thought. well expressed and to the point.
— SteelAngel
thank you steelangel!
— tiedtoes
the more I read this, the more relative it is. WOW. very strong.
— themolly
thanks.
— tiedtoes
:(
— unknown
crazy concise and flawless.
bravo
— unknown
thank u
— tiedtoes
well said
short with a lot of meanings intwined.
awesome job.
— SweetPain
Wow! such insight
— EmmanuelThom
thank you everyone
— tiedtoes
oh so good
— tragicbubble
very fascinating poem
— Daniel1985
Well, now that over a year has gone by, I finally get it!
— Isabelle5
pretty good.. made me think.
— saysayonara
It is a unique poem... how many of us are shouting in silence?
— TomasOCartha
Not enough..
— unknown
thanks guys. I like this one too.
— tiedtoes
If knowledge is power, then I shouldn't have gotten question 45 wrong on my physics test, "What is power?" I'm so mad!!
7/10
— Henry
Still good, after a year.
— Isabelle5
this is NOT a poem. it's too short!
— Trudy
honey, poems come in all shapes and sizes. deal wit it.
— tiedtoes
sweet meep
— tiedtoes
It makes me happy to see other people writing little poems.
I think I like the little ones best.
— AtomBombJohn
thank you atombomb
— tiedtoes
Simple, yet true. Very nicely put.
— candykid
awww thanks
— tiedtoes
neat.
: )
— fractalcore
thanks frac
— tiedtoes
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