don't worry about censoring stuff, man.
but otherwise this isn't very true. hm.
good structure, though.
Fuct? Is that a new form of sexual intercourse?
Fuct rhymes with tear duct and any fool can see this was written colloquially.
who wants to be any fool?
i've seen worse
no. i don't think this works. call me a fool. some of you others are so good, too, blue spot for example.
as a poem. i mean, i dont think its a very good poem, although a clever idea.
just my opinion.
thats way to clever I think!
Oh, this poem is fuct. Why would a man be shamed to have cried more recently than getting laid? Is there a punchline to this?
I think it's the other way around, Jack. A man who can "fuc" and not cry is a shame, in my opinion.
The fact that the first two lines rhyme is rather annoying, but other than that it's pretty good. You sound like my kind of man, poetic-ish, but not all sensivive and touchy.
Personally, I haven't been fuct in years. I sure have cried a lot of tears though and I'm 10x the man I used to be for it.
HAHAHAHAHAHA!@ I love my poet friends. Starr, I'm falling off my chair laughing!