Comments:
Cool!
— unknown
very cool!
— rodney
Clever. Groovy, even.
-Rhein
— Rhein
haha, interesting.!
— Thenameless
i may still have three eyes. how would i know?
— hank
all the better to see me with my dear (cackle)
— unknown
Maybe it's a piece of dialect contributed to style but L6-only could- and maybe capitilize To... or a line break just cause the poem losses sense there but you can manage to understand, its not that bad, just some bad break lines and disregard for grammar. Just because its small and simple doesnt mean it doesnt need a little sharpening on the edges...
the idea is smart and quirky... .
— unknown
i have 3 nipples,.........
— unknown
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