| Don't Be Afraid, Because We All Are
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SweetPain
| We are all in fear of the same thing: | 1 |
exposure. | 2 |
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Exposure of ones inner-self; | 3 |
our feelings, | 4 |
motives, | 5 |
desires, | 6 |
and perversions. | 7 |
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So withdrawn, | 8 |
into our own insecure psyches | 9 |
we play our own mind games. | 10 |
Where, we then call for the expertise | 11 |
of psychologist (and sometimes a psychotherapist) | 12 |
to play along and figure out our secrets. | 13 |
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It all seems so simply | 14 |
pointless | 15 |
to be so hidden. | 16 |
Because, at the base of it all | 17 |
we are all fucked up. | 18 |
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i guess i was wrong, reading this poem now it seems finished. i just changed around stanza 3 and 4. but suggestions are always welcome :D |
15 Sep 05 |
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lines 11 and 12 are so true. i really like this. im interested to see what else you are going to add.
— bear
love it!
— lonelygirl
thanks bear and lonelygirl. i hope you guys enjoy the switcheroo!
— SweetPain
psychologist psychotherapist
this is good
— themolly
thanks a bunch themolly.
— SweetPain
i felt as if it was finished too. i just didn't say anything. very good! (9)
— bear
better:)
— themolly
This is excellent. I love it.
Probably true too.....:-) Or at least it feels true at 2.42am Greenwich mean time when I should be sleeping.
— smugzy
thanks so much for the comments and encouraging words : bear,themolly and smugzy.
btw smugzy, to me everything seems to make more sense in the very early morning :D lol
— SweetPain
it seems very conversational and revealing. almost like something said when starting to really open up to a person.
— firstasianbo
this made me feel better.
hence a favorite ;-)
— trochee
thanks guys :D
— SweetPain
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