|Don't Be Afraid, Because We All Are
We are all in fear of the same thing:
Exposure of ones inner-self;
into our own insecure psyches
we play our own mind games.
Where, we then call for the expertise
of psychologist (and sometimes a psychotherapist)
to play along and figure out our secrets.
It all seems so simply
to be so hidden.
Because, at the base of it all
we are all fucked up.
i guess i was wrong, reading this poem now it seems finished. i just changed around stanza 3 and 4. but suggestions are always welcome :D
15 Sep 05
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lines 11 and 12 are so true. i really like this. im interested to see what else you are going to add.
thanks bear and lonelygirl. i hope you guys enjoy the switcheroo!
this is good
thanks a bunch themolly.
i felt as if it was finished too. i just didn't say anything. very good! (9)
This is excellent. I love it.
Probably true too.....:-) Or at least it feels true at 2.42am Greenwich mean time when I should be sleeping.
thanks so much for the comments and encouraging words : bear,themolly and smugzy.
btw smugzy, to me everything seems to make more sense in the very early morning :D lol
it seems very conversational and revealing. almost like something said when starting to really open up to a person.
this made me feel better.
hence a favorite ;-)
thanks guys :D