| Why Can't Gorgeous Men Just Keep Their Mouths Shut
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SweetPain
| I remember the first day. | 1 |
The first day I realised I loved you. | 2 |
You, | 3 |
seemed so perfect | 4 |
shining with the idealism's light. | 5 |
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But then, | 6 |
I dug to your | 7 |
depths. | 8 |
Which proved to | 9 |
be quite shallow, | 10 |
with your fixation | 11 |
on the functions of my loins. | 12 |
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If only your: green eyes, | 13 |
perfect ass, | 14 |
structured abs, | 15 |
and beautiful face | 16 |
reflected your insides. | 17 |
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16 Sep 05 |
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pot, meet kettle.
— noodleman
gorgeous
— themolly
Good stuff. I look at my wrinkly ugly hung over old face and i know why woman never look at me twice exept when i occasionally go out with an old brass door knocker tied to my groin,but then i know they won't want me for my face and when we get to it they'll be bitterly disappointed.I know my insides are beautiful but what good is that in the surface image laden society we live in?
— larrylark
thanks for the comments noodlemen, themolly, and larrylark.
noodle, i dont understand your little analogy (i'm rather slow with these things).
larry, if your comfortable with your insides and outsides every women will want you.
confidence can do wonders trust me:D
— SweetPain
nice poem...
— lonelygirl
thankyou lonelygirl.
— SweetPain
"i know my insides are beautiful.."
i think i'm going to cry :(
— unknown
oh my! dont do that, go read a happy poem or something.
please dont be sad.
-SweetPain-
— unknown
Very very nice, i like this alot
— unknown
thank you :D
— SweetPain
......and yet .........another generation finds the worm has turned. Beautifully worked.
— unknown
thanks :D
— SweetPain
very nice. I like the way you set this up. good one
— themolly
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