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it all comes so quickly
shadowskiss

It's about how
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the sky felt
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when it shook
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the ground
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How the wind whispered
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across the windows
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and slid through trees
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impatiently
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How our shoes were off
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and our feet curled
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to find warmth
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in cold places
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How the lightning
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darted and bounced
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looking for a place
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that felt
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just like home
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It was about
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how the rain fell
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and melted in
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with the music
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It was about
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how the rain fell
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and saw right through me
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I guess it was about
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how the rain poured,
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and you saw right through me.
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17 Sep 05

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oh amazing!
 — tragicbubble

very nice poem. take out italics though.
 — hank

thankyou!! And, the italics are gone.
 — shadowskiss

elses?
 — shadowskiss

i hang out at emo sites cause i catch me young chicks that  way


this internet thing is great


ain't it?
 — unknown

Be still my heart
 — RENEELOCKE

nicely done  
 — unknown

thanks to both. :)
 — shadowskiss

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