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EdwardDurden

What man makes,
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man can explain.
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What man creates,
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man can destroy.
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And yes, as I recite these words,
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I make love, I make,
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only to be destroyed.
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Beyond our ability, love is sound
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and not for us to tamper with.
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Making love is not a comprehendible idea,
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For what is done is done.
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22 Sep 05


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wow crazy i was just rading what about bob and i hit back and you added this one the same second.woah. hmm nice poem. its a bit overdone maybe but still good.hm
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