| plaid of coat
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onklcrispy
| new feature film extravakganza event spectakular event!! | 1 |
coming soon, to multiplexes neverywhere, soon! | 2 |
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is film called: "coat of plaid" | 3 |
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in your car, drive to see it seen! | 4 |
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for i will be starring in the starring role! | 5 |
as "man in brown slacks!" | 6 |
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cry. | 7 |
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28 Sep 05 |
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no. sing! and drop the a in line 1!
— bettalpha
I WANT TO LOOK AT THIS LATER AND THAT'S WHY I'M POSTING NOW OKAY?
— OKcomputer
Last line brings it all together.
The last line is like its own poem.
I loved it.
Wow.
I want to print this.
— OKcomputer
you are flummoxy! this is a pumpkin of a poem.
— noodleman
it feels lonely
— OKcomputer
drive to see it seen - sounds like Dr Seuss. Very silly and fun.
-- ka (your juju-bee)
— unknown
me thinks line1 should be:
"new feature film spectakular extravakganza event!!"
or adding a word:
"new feature film spectakular extravakganza-like event!!"
nonetheless. it is another awsome poem and again a favorite.
if you choose to accept my adaptation, i would be ever so honoured o'scuba moose manufacturing king of random.
;P
— tearsofblood
PS ur really crazy!
me like-y
— tearsofblood
This is so so so beautiful.
— OKcomputer
don't think i've forgotten you, you beautiful thing. it will happen at the right time.
okc
— unknown
bring out the brassbands and cowbells hail herald this is good poem
— stout
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