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plaid of coat
onklcrispy

new feature film extravakganza event spectakular event!!
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coming soon, to multiplexes neverywhere, soon!
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is film called: "coat of plaid"
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in your car, drive to see it seen!
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for i will be starring in the starring role!
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as "man in brown slacks!"
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cry.
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28 Sep 05

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no. sing! and drop the a in line 1!
 — bettalpha

I WANT TO LOOK AT THIS LATER AND THAT'S WHY I'M POSTING NOW OKAY?
 — OKcomputer

Last line brings it all together.

The last line is like its own poem.

I loved it.

Wow.

I want to print this.
 — OKcomputer

you are flummoxy! this is a pumpkin of a poem.
 — noodleman

it feels lonely
 — OKcomputer

drive to see it seen - sounds like Dr Seuss. Very silly and fun.

-- ka (your juju-bee)
 — unknown

me thinks line1 should be:
"new feature film spectakular extravakganza event!!"
or adding a word:
"new feature film spectakular extravakganza-like event!!"
nonetheless. it is another awsome poem and again a favorite.
if you choose to accept my adaptation, i would be ever so honoured o'scuba moose manufacturing king of random.

;P
 — tearsofblood

PS ur really crazy!
me like-y
 — tearsofblood

This is so so so beautiful.
 — OKcomputer

don't think i've forgotten you, you beautiful thing. it will happen at the right time.

okc
 — unknown

bring out the brassbands and cowbells hail herald this is good poem
 — stout

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