| Wishing Wells
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bear
| A quarter for a wish, | 1 |
whatever you want, | 2 |
just twenty-five cents. | 3 |
What a deal! | 4 |
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My mother is dying, please save her... | 5 |
I want a pony! | 6 |
Help me pass this test. | 7 |
I have cancer, I need help. | 8 |
Please make daddy go to heaven... | 9 |
I wish for a gazilion dollars. | 10 |
There's a monster under my bed, make it go away. | 11 |
Make Uncle Johnny stop touching me. | 12 |
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I collect all those quarters | 13 |
from the bottom of the well. | 14 |
Those wishes support my | 15 |
heroin habit. | 16 |
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28 Sep 05 |
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i should be writing a reflection on the gospel of luke right now, but this was much more fun
— bear
the last four lines if habit was hobbit. are a genius short poem.
— bettalpha
um thanks betalpha? can you tell me how to improve on the poem as a whole?
anybody?
— bear
oh, my!
i tossed a quarter into the wishing well. i wished to know... how deep it was.
i can't help you with this one. i am too sick to think?
— Lia
lia, your sick!? thats not good at all, i'm, sorry to hear that.
barracudas, i'm glad you like it!
— bear
all better now :)
i wrote the longest comment to reply to you a few days ago, but it didn't work when i posted it and i was so upset. i am far too lazy to write it up again. sorry.
watch this space.
— Lia
i'm glad u feel better! i hate it when stuff doenst work. o well.
— bear
wow this is so cool. it reminds me of what it'd be like to hear people's prayer intentions.
i like.
— ducktape
yea, i guess it is kind of like praying and it makes me think what precentage of prayers are actually answered and which prayers are needed and which aren't... it really makes you think
— bear
yeah. it does.
— ducktape
You always choose good concepts for your content, but I'm always disappointed by the execution of such concepts. In time you will grow.
— unknown
yes, i agree with you unknown... i think i have a good mind for subject matters, it is just the writing that gets in the way...
— bear
Never saw this before. It's quite creative, especially that last line.
— Isabelle5
thank you
— bear
HAHAHAHA! This is fucking hilarious! Or I'm just a sick bastard. Either way I enjoyed it.
— grneyeddevil
haha me too
— bear
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