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english canopy
hank

all above blue and
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green speckled and
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those birch fingertips
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with soft jagged and
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paperdoll cutout edges
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that filter the air and
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the depth as far and
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as clear as the eye
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can see.
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4 Oct 05

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nice poem :)
 — kitkat

sleeping under the trees again?  so nice.

But seriously...'birch fingertips' and 'paperdoll cutout' is just perfect.
 — kitkat

yes, was out last weekend with friends. nice. but some got lost.
 — hank

some of those 'paperdolls' look more like hobgoblins depending on your point of view.
 — hank

lost friends? :(

or your view of point I guess.
 — kitkat

they got lost because they hit trees an fell down an slept before seeing the beacon of the campfire to light their way home.
 — hank

that makes me feel nostalgic
 — kitkat

glad i could participate in your reverie.
 — hank

fucking brilliant
 — unknown

nice. good list-like reading.
 — listen

Really beautiful. Captures something about Englands countryside that can be found no where else
 — larrylark

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