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english canopy

all above blue and	1
green speckled and	2
those birch fingertips	3
with soft jagged and	4
paperdoll cutout edges	5
that filter the air and	6
the depth as far and	7
as clear as the eye	8
can see.	9

4 Oct 05

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nice poem :)
— kitkat

sleeping under the trees again? so nice.

But seriously...'birch fingertips' and 'paperdoll cutout' is just perfect.
— kitkat

yes, was out last weekend with friends. nice. but some got lost.
— hank

some of those 'paperdolls' look more like hobgoblins depending on your point of view.
— hank

lost friends? :(

or your view of point I guess.
— kitkat

they got lost because they hit trees an fell down an slept before seeing the beacon of the campfire to light their way home.
— hank

that makes me feel nostalgic
— kitkat

glad i could participate in your reverie.
— hank

fucking brilliant
— unknown

nice. good list-like reading.
— listen

Really beautiful. Captures something about Englands countryside that can be found no where else
— larrylark

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