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BAD / RAP

3-letter word poem, just for fun.

ONE	1
MAN	2
HAD	3
HER	4

THE	5
GUY	6
WAS	7
MAN	8
ONE	9

SHE	10
WAS	11
ONE	12
TWO	13

BUT	14
WHO	15
WAS	16
SHE,	17

THE	18
NEW	19
ONE	20
WHO	21
HAD	22
HIS	23
OWN	24
RIB	25

AND	26
BOY	27
WAS	28
SHE	29
HOT	30
TOO	31

SHE	32
WAS	33
NOT	34
BAD	35

WAS	36
SHE	37

FOR	38
ONE	39
DAY	40
SHE	41
HAD	42
HIM	43
EAT	44
FOR	45
HER	46
AND	47
SIN	48

AND	49
THE	50
MAN	51
DID	52
'ERR	53

HIS	54
ERR	55
WAS	56
FOR	57
ALL	58
MEN	59

YOU	60
TOO	61
ARE	62
HIS	63
ERR	64

FOR	65
EVE	66
AND	67
EVE.	68
ALL	69
MEN	70

14 Jun 03

Rated 9 (7.4) by 4 users.

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Comments:

cute. creative.
— thinknerd

very cute :)
— Ananke

This is incredible -- the only thing I'd like to see you ditch is the apostrophe in the first 'err' -- why?
— unknown

I figure that apostrophe is a pun. And the other "err" is a pun as well (one which is used in a King's Quest title as well). This is gnormal, after all. And I like puns.
— semaj

um........well your certainly no Eminem or 2Pac for that matter but you tried..YEY!!!
— unknown

I get the second pun, what was the first about? and how does the parentheses get that out? and who has been posting these (see above) inane comments?

quite shiny job, gnormal. a scathing bite and I love the pun at the end. TINY TALE is better, but only because it is better by its very nature; that is not to say this poem has any shortcomings, for it doesn't. I just like TINY TALE.
— unknown

what parenthesis?
the single apostrophe is used in place of a letter.
in this case, H.
is that what kings quest did? the only kings quest ive ever seen was running on my little brother's tandy 1000 "PC compatible" 8086. did he do her? who?
— unknown

ok....
— unknown

The second 'err' pun to which I was referring was the err on l64 (used in the title of KQIII, specifically).

I must admit that I find old computer games rather enticing to continue playing these days. Oh, the puns and jokes in such! It's quite entertaining.
-semaj
— unknown

like the idea and all behind this, but the caps and singular words give me a goddamn headache, scrolling down to read this.
— wendz

impressed. very creative
— lonelygirl

stoner.but still mad
— bobmarlie9

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— unknown

err requires no apostrophe, and do you mean "heir" the second time you use it?
— saysayonara

the apostrophe is there for a reason (h).
yes i mean "heir", as well as "err".
you only read it once?
— gnormal

this thingamadooooooodle
is nifty...
'specially
L65-70...that's great, BUT

needs a monkey
— chuckles

now that's cool. 10/10
— IamDave

gr8
.exe
cue
sh'n

: )
— fractalcore

umm, make that

DON-CHA-TUT

gr8
.exe
cue
sh'n

: )
*2/27/08*
— fractalcore

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