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Is This Really My Best Side?
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"We must question the story logic of having an all-knowing all-powerful God, who creates faulty Humans, and then blames them for his own mistakes."
- Gene Roddenberry


If your God is open to ejaculate the answers,
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I'm easy enough to get on my knees.
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26 Oct 05

Rated 8 (9) by 2 users.
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i dont get it?
 — unknown

three ellipses.
 — unknown

ha ha ha. so great.
 — Xiada

I'm afraid to open my mouth. Seriously, this is one gorgeous poem. ( 10 + )
 — graceinmtl

please don't do this

please don't

i ave not tasted semen in a very long time. and that's not right you see.

you should be ashamed of yourself

you goddamed tease!!!!!!!!!!!

time to sniff some bleach. eat a carob tree.
 — unknown

beautiful
 — unknown

Thanks.
 — lieskilllies

Wow, I can't decide if this is wonderful or heretical!
 — Isabelle5

both
 — unknown

I agree with unknown.
 — lieskilllies

A whole new meaning to the nectar of the Gods! Beware spontaneous lightening storms!
 — Vicky-Liz

hahah, alright.
 — lieskilllies

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