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As noted by the Homeo/Socio Pathetic Fizzician
netskyIam

=why it is best to avoid illness=

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Hopitals are hospitable
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mostly to their Staff and staph.
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One costs dear, the other's free.
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As for the wordier mal du jours?
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Shun bad treatments,
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yes, please, do see me.
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28 Oct 05


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I love the line breaks and the punctuation in this poem.
 — hemothymia

still formatting. I'll spoil it yet (grin)
 — netskyIam

OK, cured.   I put it up early in error in example of Post Lust.
Definition of Post Lust?   - Premature Elucidation-.    It's all ego, see?  Inescapable....
as human foolishnesse always are.
 — netskyIam

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