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Posing as Puck in Redux
netskyIam

This mid-eon's dream....
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Awakening now and shaking loin's spear
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Dawning that he, my former peer
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Is yet myself, is Puck, the elf.  
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Ho! I find this new Internet
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Hath a take and gifts a let
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To unsoothe the savage sylphic breast.
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Inhaling old memory now as is best
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From my Father's fontings:
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    - Fairy-
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    "Either I mistake your shape and making quite,
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    Or else you are that shrewd and knavish sprite
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    Call'd Robin Goodfellow: are not you he
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    That frights the maidens of the villagery;
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    Skim milk, and sometimes labour in the quern
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    And bootless make the breathless housewife  churn;
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    And sometime make the drink to bear no barm;
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    Mislead night-wanderers, laughing at their harm?
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    Those that Hobgoblin call you and sweet Puck,
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    You do their work, and they shall have good luck:
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    Are not you he?"
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Indeed!
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Like butter ye skim from nest of the cow;
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As sweet as the beet that shugars thy pie.
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Not a duck nor the cock,  but as flown as the sky;
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I am Robin, your good fellow, Mab kind allows.
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29 Oct 05

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ahaha i love this. mid-eon's dream, lol. it's great.

but the quote does take up a lot of it. being a quote... in a poem... meh.
 — Ananke

This, my love is idyll-a-try.
By Puck as Pure as Polygamy.
And so if you'll string along these lines
Of arts like bowers shall ever entwine
The poesies and the meh ? It's a belle,
And even crass Archie is welcome as well.
 — netskyIam

Yea!
I love Puck
and this poem!
 — Krttika

I dig line 3---funny
 — Krttika

Males awake tumescent..  Or rather,  perhaps it is  tumescence that awakens the male of yoru species?
???  
Thanks to Krttika and Ananke.    
 — netskyIam

I was puck in A Midsummer Night's Dream, I got a standing ovation.
 — Him

Ain't you a clever lad~
=)
 — mandolyn

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