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You Got The Point Across

Believe me.	1
I heard it with my own four limbs.	2

4 Nov 05

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hard hitting
— krsrevol

You dog, you!
— unknown

I think this is a wonderful poem. I simply wonder if a more elongated (tortured) shape might be more visually effective. Crucifixion is a timeless theme.
— graceinmtl

Trust me
I read it with my heart
— WilliamGruff

is this about humiliation?
— crepaway

Sure.
Thanks.
Agreed.
Okay.
No.
— lieskilllies

DNT MAKE SENSE TO MEH SO IT SUCS!!!!!!!!!!1
— BADBOI

gnormal is good.
really good.
: )
— fractalcore

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