| I can hate people too.
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Cloudless
| Fuck you. You fucking let me go again. | 1 |
You let me down and it wasn’t easy. | 2 |
You dropped me like a fucking piece of trailer trash garbage | 3 |
and I don’t appreciate it. | 4 |
I won’t stand for it. | 5 |
I don’t need this again. | 6 |
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Rejection: | 7 |
When asked about fears most people say: | 8 |
spiders, needles, snakes, the dark. | 9 |
But what they all mean is: | 10 |
rejection, rejection, rejection. | 11 |
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Deny it all you want | 12 |
your core fear, around which you base all your actions | 13 |
is rejection. | 14 |
If not- then you’re the one we’ve all been rejecting. | 15 |
As a coping tool for this fear we all have, | 16 |
we say “Look, | 17 |
I can hate people too” | 18 |
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It’s not you who alone has this power to reject | 19 |
I can do it too, I can do it quicker, faster, better | 20 |
Rejection is mine, you can’t reject me. | 21 |
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6 Nov 05 |
Rated 5 (5) by 2 users.
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I weird thing is; I kind of actually get this poem. In this odd way, I don't know how, it makes a little bit of sense... But I'm guessing that your mom isn't Governor Granholm? : )
— HellsAngel
Haha! I like this...
— kandiekay
Ahahaha, nope, she's definitely not- I don't even live in Michigan. I just have a bad habit of telling outrageous lies, more because I don't think anyone will believe them than because I want people to think my mom's the governor.
and Why a two? I mean I know it's not the best and most "poemy" of poems.. but I dunno.. oh well.
— Cloudless
This is strangly welcoming. very intriguing. I'm not too sure why but i like it.
— emptyepitaph
Thank you <3
— Cloudless
Discount all comments before this one- I have posted a new poem in place of an old one because I posted too many in a row, but I really wanted to get this one out of my system.
— Cloudless
I don't know.
Meep
— unknown
This is really less a poem and more a rant- sorry ya'll.
— Cloudless
You know that if you delete, it gives you space to post a new poem immediately, right?
— unknown
I like it too. It makes a lot of sense. And it IS a rant, but it's a very realistic and true rant. I love how you used the word "poem-y!" That's adorable!
— starr
Hah- thanks Starr, its based on true occurences.
— Cloudless
that is not a good peom it suxxxxxxxxxx
— unknown
leave out the footnote, it makes all the passion here seem lame. This is good stuff, but it doesn't flow like a poem. Maybe a short story.
— unknown
If I ever write a short story, I'll be sure to include it- or maybe I will write one and base it around the situation that inspired this. and the footnote is gone
— Cloudless
better now. And yes, do write a short story, you're good at getting intensity of feeling across, and understand how people work.
— unknown
Fucking fuck you ,you fucking fucked me again, you fucking fucked-up bitch.
I like your original use of words.
— unknown
I like it as well.
— Cloudless
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