Comments:
bump for D to hit it.
— netskyIam
who wrote this? it's not bad lol... actually i like it.
— Young_Poet05
oh! nvm.. this poetry place is still trippin' me out. Gon' take a while to get use to.
— Young_Poet05
lol, who the hell is Derrick?!
— Kauf
me!
— Young_Poet05
hmmm. unusual. nice onomatopoeia, or whatever it is.
— inutile
who wrote this? it's not bad lol... actually i like it.
– Young_Poet05
I wrote it, Derrick! Me, reid!
lol, who the hell is Derrick?!
– Kauf
Derrick is our board's hip-hopping up and coming recording star
(we hope!)
Could you make something performable out of the lyric, D?
If so, have at it!
— netskyIam
lol probably not, but thanx for the offer. Oh, by the way i sent you a message and poem via E-Mail.
— Young_Poet05
oh dang maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan
i was sure you were meaning derrick walcott, mannnnnnnnnnnnnnn
my brotha, my mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
raftermanaftermorninsexondebutcher'sblock
— unknown
outside the sphere of my experience and yet strangely compelling.
— Meep
line 13 is missing a beat
for sure
i tell you dis from de bottom of my heart
gupta
— unknown
Groan. More horrible stuff.
— unknown
ah, the power of The One Bomber,
going through all my old poems marking them with "1's", from multiple posting accounts,
and making disparagement without a shed of genuine commentary.
Thanks for the rise, thanks for the new reads.
— netskyIam
Dear Derrick
This has real life,colour and feel.Its full of life
— larrylark
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