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unknown
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He flapped his wings | 2 |
and was gone... | 3 |
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into the night | 4 |
The bitch black night | 5 |
The unfaithful bitch, black night | 6 |
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He flew over the usual stuff; | 7 |
rooftops, church spires | 8 |
deserted shopping centres | 9 |
occasional cars, stragglers | 10 |
rag tagellers, disheveled | 11 |
revellers, marauding | 12 |
muggers, perverted | 13 |
buggers, underage | 14 |
huggers,cuckolding | 15 |
fuggers and cold | 16 |
cheating slags | 17 |
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On and on ... | 18 |
Over fields and rivers | 19 |
Hills and dales | 20 |
On and on... | 21 |
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till dawn | 22 |
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The bitch beautiful dawn | 23 |
The unfaithful bitch, beautiful Dawn | 24 |
texted her sobbing shame, and begged | 25 |
him return with a merciful heart | 26 |
a pint of milk and a | 27 |
small brown loaf. | 28 |
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10 Nov 05 |
Rated 9.5 (9.3) by 2 users.
Active (2): 9, 10
Inactive (1): 9
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you made me thrummm
kaleidazcope
— unknown
This poem is great. I really like the alliteration and "cockeyed" rhyme scheme. Ah, this treats me.
— Doulos
Wow LOL I love it. Can you send me a pair of underpants i can wear outside my trousers.
Larry man on a mission Lark
— larrylark
thrummms up or down K?
thanks a lot, D & L, glad you enjoyed, but a lark in underpants would be just plain cockarsed.
cheers :)
— unknown
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— unknown
great use of swearing words,
fantastic poem
— photobooth
If this rhymed you'd be on to something. 2/10
— Henry
Ta for comment, p. Glad you liked.
Ta for bumping this up again, H.
— unknown
nice.
— listen
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