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art
hank

art turns to art in
 1
so many ways
 2
but mostly
 3
humans trying days
 4
against eternity
 5

19 Nov 05

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Sometimes I have to remind myself that I have to breathe even while I read poetry ...
lovely work. clear voice, beautimous!
And thanks God for art and for verbs like "trying"
Maria
 — slancho

your opening line is along the lines of something i have written recently. and very true.
i love the word order in 4. nice switch on trying. i like your poem.
 — bettalpha

ah, hunk.
 — bettalpha

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