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Moonshine
larrylark

Go on Mr. Moon, big round cheese,
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soaring over these maturing fields,
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soft as the breeze that blows you along,
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easing your beam onto me.
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I am a free citizen of this land,
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my long johns and string vest
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steam, delicately fanned
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on the pulley by the paraffin heater's
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head fogging fumes
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next to hung game, fermenting still.
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Beaded moisture clings to window frames,
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behind threadbare stained curtains.
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Room suffused with ethereal glow.
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Soon I'll be asleep, rhythmically snoring
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beneath clouds enclosing you in darkness.
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19 Nov 05

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A real back story in here and very elemental under all those portents and symbols - the poacher ruled by the power of the moon - double meanings aplenty - fine poem,
 — unknown

This is great.
 — Hear

i love your poem. it has a real landowner poacher sociological microcosm to it.
 — bettalpha

Dear Bettalpha

I'm so glad someone feels about it the way i do

Larry dead of night Lark
 — unknown

DearUnknown
Thank you for you insightful comments which are much appreciated.

Larry
 — unknown

Dear Hear Glad you think so

Larry
 — larrylark

love this! all your poems are great!
 — Lulu

Dear Lulu

and your comments are great too


Larry chuffed Lark
 — larrylark

very clever, I'm left with my senses tingling...great poem.
 — jenakajoffer

Dear Jenakajoffer

Thanks again for taking the time and trouble to read.
 — larrylark

I'm listing this as one of my favorites but what am I missing? I don't read anything about poachers and landowners in this poem.

It's the way I feel after an evening hunt.
 — unknown

great poem.
 — listen

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