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you
hank

by the way
 1
 
 
was hoping to look
 2
was hoping you up
 3
was going to
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look you up
 5
 
 
just thought i
 6
would mention
 7

16 Dec 05

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you. invites outward.
could be anyone.

i leave this poem with 7 etched in my brain.

chuckles. boxed.
 — kaleidazcope

could be anyone but isn't.
 — hank

yeah... ya know, it gets kinda diplomatic with women....
i wish i could just call.
 — unknown

or 'would' just call.
 — unknown

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