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you

by the way	1

was hoping to look	2
was hoping you up	3
was going to	4
look you up	5

just thought i	6
would mention	7

16 Dec 05

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you. invites outward.
could be anyone.

i leave this poem with 7 etched in my brain.

chuckles. boxed.
— kaleidazcope

could be anyone but isn't.
— hank

yeah... ya know, it gets kinda diplomatic with women....
i wish i could just call.
— unknown

or 'would' just call.
— unknown

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