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crow replies to the generic question
netskyIam

"How can you know I am unhappy?"
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crow
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caws you are human
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you are not happy free
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flying cannot for man be nor
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worms those french call vers of which
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i eat and crop up regu
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larly
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caws
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man can only wing a bird
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not by flight but
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only shot
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so i have heard
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have not felt that sting
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am yet myself
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and so flies crow
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and swift and why
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for just
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caws
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and for plain caws
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crow eschews
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all punc
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tuations except
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ver
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crow pikes with beak
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10 Jan 06

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lol. i love this
 — johntaiyu

wonderful poem, Skynet. So much cleverness. Nimble, light, just that right bite of taunting. Bilingually cunning. Your line breaks are such a tease.

Grace
 — borntodance

crow replies 2 poet question, be?
 — unknown

Really funny.
 — unknown

you call that an insult? dont quit your day job mr. social worker.
 — TheO1dCrow

Oh don't be silly, New Orleans boy. This poem was born before you entered Netsky's world.
 — borntodance

oh thats what he was getting at with the young crow. still...what the hell is he trying to say?
 — TheO1dCrow

refined
 — unknown

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