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sans chickens (a revis)
netskyIam

so much depends
 1
on
 2
 
 
a red wheeled
 3
kiln
 4
 
 
glazed and cast
 5
off
 6
 
 
beside the white
 7
china bones
 8

24 Jan 06

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WCW's 1924 poem follows:




    so much depends
    upon

    a red wheel
    barrow

    glazed with rain
    water

    beside the white
    chickens
 — netskyIam

Not as good or as clever at the original, which makes sense no matter which way you read it, but a very good attempt.
 — unknown

oh..contemporary gone wrong.
 — unknown

Good Poem.
 — unknown

this lampoon has been revised
with a proper spoof-title
and alteration of "orange ceramics" to "red pottery".

how now ceramic cow?
 — netskyIam

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