Comments:
haha - i like this, made me laugh for some reason. I expected something different from that title, but there we go.
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— Rousseau
Yes! this is just how I like it =D
— SeanConnery
I love this. But if you're feeling generous, could you explain how love factors in this poem? Luminous word play.
— borntodance
I would like to know Isabelle's opinion before I comment. Then I will agree like a good dog
— unknown
love is an after-sex cigarette? ( sardonic )
It matters not. It's gorgeous
— borntodance
love is an after-sex cigarette? i'm sorry I don't understand ( (portrait of innocence) )
I adored the poem too.
— unknown
I find the phrasing in line 1 absolutely tragically good. I have my own vision of it in my head now. I'm not convinced about lines 2-3 as truth but they are well-written and nicely presented.
— Isabelle5
I'd love to know precisely what vision.
— unknown
it's good to know what you're agreeing with, I find.
— unknown
Sheesh, I didin't think my poem was very good. Then again, I can never judge my own work that well. Thanks for the comments everyone.
— derelict_me
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