Comments:
Another gas/excrement poem? I did find your use of core quite clever.
— Isabelle5
nice.
but not, really.
subject matter-wise.
I suppose the mark of a good poet is finding poems in everything.
even excrement.
— povertea
vomit, crap, gas? This dude is nasty, plain and simple
— unknown
Philosophical and yet the poetic worth is lost to meaning, perhaps.
Meep
— unknown
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