2 Feb 06
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in tune. i'm in tune. i'm in tune with you. we're in tune. [?]
a century crossed.
too cewebwal -- woger adultwee: gettin in tune wid you, i'm in tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuune
and we gonna get in tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuune
out here in da fields
teenage baste land
oh oh oh
its only teenage basteland
this could be interpreted in a zillion different ways...everything from sweet to dramatic to fatal and tyrannic...
the beginning of life...
forgot about the damn title...
this is hopelessly perfect.
it's one of those poems you couldn't believe hadn't always existed.
I love it, but it might be better if both lines had the same number of syllables. Just a suggestion.
funny how just a few words.
my 100th? or 1?
it's simply funny how words.
not sure i understand the last comment.
I would like it the other way, too. But I think I'd change the title to "In Tune." but it's not really about tune, so ignore me.
i love your poem
crossed a hundred. poems... ... ......
funny how some words can mean so many different things.
it's just funny how words mean. that's all.
what's with hank? Is his IQ over 160? He's the first genius poet in Western history.
i like it, despite it's lack of length.
it's got power.
well then, you've shown me up with this couplet.
so few words
hold such power.
i truely enjoied this.
ya'll must've had that sucker
cranked all the way to th' bottom
i think you wrote this inside 1
of them staccatto beats...
yeah, wrote it during one of them staccato beats.
this is the finest poem ever posted to pc.
i just wanted you to know that i read this and it had stuck with me forever, and i could never remember where it was from.
it's tattooed on the inside of my right arm now. i hope you don't mind.
^ wow , i was going to point this out to varun ( its about the beautiful Spanish lady ) .
Shakeit could you post a picture of it ?.
thanks for bringing it into view, clan sir.
hank's a superstar.
i second that wow
your neat little poem
that's not the best photo of it. i designed it myself,andi knew the quote wasn't mine but i couldn't remember for the life of me what it was from. (upon some research, i found it here, so now i know who to credit for the wonderful words.)
it's only a few days old, but it gets a ton of compliments.
cannot get to that page you posted a link for, mate... try again? maybe in the forums...
yes. the website now autobreaks all links, in the comments sections of the poems.
well it's swift-kick at deviantart dot com, and in the gallery it's the one titled 'yourpulsetattoo'
so, i'll do that instead of linking it.
shakeit , i can't find your tattoo at all , can you post a link to it on the message board ??
i'm not so fond of tattoos
but this piece rocks!
.. yes but i bet the words aren't real..
-- Leaf Rainbow
well,it's on her skin.
yeah, i remember this.
lovely. love it when old stuff pops up. 06. i was here!! thanks
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apparently i hated this in 06 and now i quite love it. go figure!! thanks
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