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hank
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2 Feb 06 |
Rated 8.4 (8.5) by 7 users.
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in tune. i'm in tune. i'm in tune with you. we're in tune. [?]
nice poem.
hello hank.
a century crossed.
-varun-
— unknown
lovely couplet
— unknown
too cewebwal -- woger adultwee: gettin in tune wid you, i'm in tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuune
with you
and we gonna get in tuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuune
out here in da fields
are alive
teenage baste land
oh oh oh
its only teenage basteland
— unknown
this could be interpreted in a zillion different ways...everything from sweet to dramatic to fatal and tyrannic...
interesting idea!
— sparrow
mother.
that's it.
the beginning of life...
-varun-
— unknown
forgot about the damn title...
— unknown
this is hopelessly perfect.
timeless.
it's one of those poems you couldn't believe hadn't always existed.
kaleidazcope
— unknown
I love it, but it might be better if both lines had the same number of syllables. Just a suggestion.
— fallinforyou
funny how just a few words.
— hank
my 100th? or 1?
— hank
crossed.
it's simply funny how words.
— unknown
not sure i understand the last comment.
— hank
I would like it the other way, too. But I think I'd change the title to "In Tune." but it's not really about tune, so ignore me.
— Isabelle5
i love your poem
— bettalpha
crossed a hundred. poems... ... ......
funny how some words can mean so many different things.
it's just funny how words mean. that's all.
— unknown
what's with hank? Is his IQ over 160? He's the first genius poet in Western history.
— unknown
That's deep
— winter
i like it, despite it's lack of length.
it's got power.
— shakeit
well then, you've shown me up with this couplet.
— minusthesky
so few words
hold such power.
i truely enjoied this.
thank you.
— colormetink
heart stopping!!
— Meep
wow...
ya'll must've had that sucker
cranked all the way to th' bottom
didja?
i think you wrote this inside 1
of them staccatto beats...
hehe
— chuckles
yeah, wrote it during one of them staccato beats.
— hank
this is the finest poem ever posted to pc.
— hank
i just wanted you to know that i read this and it had stuck with me forever, and i could never remember where it was from.
it's tattooed on the inside of my right arm now. i hope you don't mind.
— shakeit
^ wow , i was going to point this out to varun ( its about the beautiful Spanish lady ) .
Shakeit could you post a picture of it ?.
— sir_I_clan
thanks for bringing it into view, clan sir.
hank's a superstar.
— varun
i second that wow
your neat little poem
is now
body art
kudos!
— chuckle_s
http://swift-kick.deviantart.com/art/yourpulsetattoo-747613 38
that's not the best photo of it. i designed it myself,andi knew the quote wasn't mine but i couldn't remember for the life of me what it was from. (upon some research, i found it here, so now i know who to credit for the wonderful words.)
it's only a few days old, but it gets a ton of compliments.
— shakeit
cannot get to that page you posted a link for, mate... try again? maybe in the forums...
— unknown
yes. the website now autobreaks all links, in the comments sections of the poems.
— unknown
well it's swift-kick at deviantart dot com, and in the gallery it's the one titled 'yourpulsetattoo'
so, i'll do that instead of linking it.
— shakeit
shakeit , i can't find your tattoo at all , can you post a link to it on the message board ??
— sir_I_clan
i'm not so fond of tattoos
but this piece rocks!
10-faved finally.
: )
— fractalcore
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