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kiss
ProzacNation

Warm, comforting
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honeyed lips caress my skin
 2
as i lay beside
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eyes closed
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masquerading sleep
 5
soaking up the tender love
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i cannot suppress the smile
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that plays upon my lips
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a bit unoriginal i know

5 Feb 06

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But it has a real nice feel
 — larrylark

aboriginarboreally cool

time to wank

thanks
 — unknown

pretty even if this theme is always used
 — unknown

i have a feeling this is marief.  
if so, MUCH better than poetic beauty!
a tough topic to tackle,
but still youve managed to infuse it with a little of you.
 — gnormal

oops- not marief.  you two might compare notes...
 — gnormal

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