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Monday Haiku

Age spoils the care free	1
Youth, wonder. It's what we seek	2
I know not its end	3

6 Feb 06

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Great job. I love it even though I think the last line should ahve a period at the end. I would sort of finish it (hehe).
— meghanmidget

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