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red wine
mwalkerd

transient emotions
 1
and mindless notions
 2
 
 
like crazy games
 3
with no winners
 4
like real emotions
 5
with no hopes
 6
 
 
heart-words pour
 7
until empty feelings travel
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hopping mind to mind
 9
unseen, unheld, only felt
 10
 
 
worlds in the mind
 11
with apocalypse outside
 12
 
 
maybe we'll go somewhere
 13
other than i expect
 14
or just another .txt
 15
an empty alphabet
 16
 
 
drinking red wine
 17
or is it iodine
 18
that turns words red
 19
and marks tongues later
 20
 
 
put this before that
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and i before thee:
 22
the cart before the horse, except after 'C'
 23
and also in words, such as...
 24
 
 
maybe we'll go somewhere
 25
more than i accept
 26
or is it pointless sex
 27
and unopened letters
 28

6 Feb 06


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i agree

go for the pointless sex

wing it big time poet head
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