| rays of sunshine gathered by frederick for the cold months
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turtlepoet
| remember | 1 |
when you get in your bed | 2 |
and your sheets are cold | 3 |
to dream of july | 4 |
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9 Feb 06 |
Rated 8 (8) by 1 users.
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I really like this. I'm pretty fond of small poems, myself, though. :)
— hemothymia
This would be fine without any funky line spacings. Even so, it is quite lovely. Well done.
— wendz
months
— unknown
ooh i enjoyed this too.
— yrrockstar
More people need to read this.
*bump*
— wendz
I think so but no one seems to want to and I have no way to force them to do so
— turtlepoet
this is lovely your apology at the beginning takes away from the experience of reading it...i adore the title, and there's a lovely paternal warmth in the shole thing...the title makes it though...yum
— berrykid
berry I think you're right about the appology it is now gone thank you
— turtlepoet
apology*
— turtlepoet
I hate to say AMAZING with a title like that...(apparently you once apologized for it; NEVER do that)
But it it is an amazing poem. A fav.
-MP
— zackrabbit
Meh. It's decent. Not much more than that.
— unknown
fucking beautiful!
-varun
— unknown
couldn't you get rid of 'your' in line 3?
-v
— unknown
to replace it with 'the' of course....
— unknown
i remember you telling me about this! this is one of those poems which is popular NOW but will be absolutely LEDGENDARY in like 50 years when we're all dead. ^.^ yay for emily dickenson!
— LycanStorm
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