| Reflection of Gotham City
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starr
| Those black | 1 |
cellophane wings | 2 |
are of some | 3 |
queer breed | 4 |
of butterfly | 5 |
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and the joke(r)'s on | 6 |
you. | 7 |
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9 Feb 06 |
Rated 10 (8.8) by 1 users.
Active (1): 10
Inactive (5): 8, 8, 8, 9, 10
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an all-Starr best. A finder and a keeper.
— unknown
Great title. I like bats. They are just as poetic as butterflies.
— unknown
Thankyou guys!
— starr
very nice
— kaleidazcope
good work. 9.
would rethink break in 7-9 with an eye to consonance.
— noodleman
queer breed
of
butterfly.
or
queer breed
..................of
....................butterfly.
maybe
— noodleman
amazing!!!!
— meghanmidget
Thanks Noodleman and everyone else who commented so favorably.
— starr
whatever it is that this one has, it has it in spades. simple, evocative, with a twist of humor at the end.
— pghpoet
pghpoet, you are kind and yes, I wanted to make sure that humor rang through loudly. thanks 4 stoppin' by. peaceout. :-)
— starr
HEHEHEHHHAHAHAHHA! HOOOHAHOSH!
Too funny. Can't breathe
— themolly
black can reflect something back too, not just absorb... nice poem...
— alambre
This is all very true, alambre. And themolly, I'm glad it made u laugh. I added it a couple of lines to add to the comic factor. Hope u like. :-)
— starr
Have I been workin' too hard/too long today or what, themolly? Good God. I meant (but it sure as hell didn't come out that way) that I added a couple of lines to it to add to the comic factor. Sorry if my last msg. didn't make sense. It didn't to me either. LOL. Nite nite. :-)
— starr
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