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what chicken little never saw coming
turtlepoet

"the sky is falling"
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"the sky is falling"
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"the sky is falling"
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then the bullet came in contact with his mind
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splattering love across the walls
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9 Feb 06

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i don't like this poem, it's mean :(
 — inutile

completely agree
R
 — Rousseau

But it shows; it doesn't tell!
 — unknown

i didn't say it was bad, just that i personally don't like it. reminds me of "happy tree friends".

i'm sure that are a lot of people on this site who will love this poem.
 — inutile

i have seen adverts for little chicken.
does this poem have something to do with that film?
if so i haven't seen it.
stand alone without context the poem is meaningless. jumbled.
something like that
 — kaleidazcope

Incoherent

Larry
 — unknown

no this has nothing to do with the movie only the original story
 — turtlepoet

it was meant to symbolize the people so worried about what goes on above them beyond their control that they forget what is happening in front of them
 — turtlepoet

you do this to chicken wittle and i swear to gwod i will kwill you

woger -- wewee angwee
 — unknown

i dunno about this poem, its kinda like using someone elses work and adding to it, dunno if i agree with that.. maybe if u made like a point - but i cant see one in this, unless u have a strong view about the problems of gun culture??
 — Bobby

thnk you bobby but actually it's a reference to what people do daily and forgetting the important thing I.E. (worrying about what they cannot change and forgetting about the person right next to them)or (working as hard and often as you can to care for your loved ones then losing them because of how much you work)


I was vague with this one but it does have a point
 — turtlepoet

hahahahahahahahahaOMG FAV! RITE THERE!! ^.^ <3
 — LycanStorm

I think this poem is mean and isn't very good either!~love chickens~
 — unknown

~!LOVE YOUR CHICKENS!~
 — unknown

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