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A Morbid Point
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Most of the time
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you wait
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for the thought to come,
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as if to
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reverberate your plaintiveness
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through a solid,
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lonely foundation composing the
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memory
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in regards
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to the tomb
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and place where stone
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centers.
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10 Feb 06


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well well this is very well done. the title is very fitting to this poem, nice job. the line breaks and wording are very well thought out and written. the idea is quite true and put forth in a digestable way. awesome poem.
 — SweetPain

thanks.
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