Comments:
Yes! I was hoping to be greeted by something short, articulate and absolutely delightful. Reading your poem is the most wonderful thing that happened to me all day. I hope you change nothing, but if you do, I'll try to be very understanding.
Beautiful poem. Thank you!
— borntodance
I love it.
— fallinforyou
thanx guys. *jittery*
— unknown
I don't understand what the title adds, or means.
— unknown
don't worry about it then.
— jittery
awesome idea behind the lines and beautifully written. why dragonflies?
varun.
— unknown
i dont know why.
— jittery
The poem is good, the reason for the title is to get our attention, I wish that had I thought of that one :)
At the risk of being picky, the last line is not logically consistent, dragonflies would just float on the surface tension.
— unknown
short and to the point. very nice!
— sparrow
fanks
— jittery
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