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Not Be Found
larrylark

He swerved  into a parking ditch road,
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no swishing tyres or plugs misfired,
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or grinding gears assault his ears,
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no neat reverse or sidestep mode.
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His wheels spun round in undergrowth,
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petrol dripped on nightshade's lip,
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while deep inside a dark ravine
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his vehicle slipped through scenery,
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sleeping deep below.
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Soil pressed hard on window's sheen,
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centipede stole  beneath.
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Ants that marched, worms that turned,
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alarmed that the trickle of their mighty stream,
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had dammed behind its gaping boot,
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spanner fell on a road map book.
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How can a person not be found,
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when a search has covered every inch of ground?
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12 Feb 06

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What is a parking ditch, I've never heard of one before. This is a real mystery. I really want to know what the facts are amongst the allusions.
 — unknown

Dear Unknown

what the hell you asking me for ,i don't have a clue.You just expect me to know everthing ,well i can jolly well tell you i'm totally clueless

Larry double yellow lines Lark
 — unknown

Okay then. Thank you I suppose.
 — unknown

Good.  Good, good, good..  Reading this, a sense of desperation resonates with me.  Liked it :)
 — CervusWright

Dera Unknown

I was only joking. Of course i will consider what you said,then i'll ditch it in a parking lot.

Larry hairy undergrowth Lark
 — unknown

Dear Cervus

I am in a permanant state of desperation.

Larry
 — unknown

i'll admit the point seems not to be found, but interesting format and poem, and images.
 — listen

Dear Listen

I think you have a good point in thata lot of poems seem to lack point and focus.There is a fine line between spelling things out and leaving space for the reader to draw there own or speculate on what they are presented.
 — Leanan

no there isn't, you just made that up.
 — unknown

Dear Unknown

I must at this point interject and inform you that my son has decided to comment on one of my poems.I don't understand what he said either .

Larry confused Lark
 — larrylark

why is every random a Larry Lark pome?
 — unknown

Because i am the secret controller of the board and i make it happen through the sheer force of my will

Larry board master and also available for tiddley winks tournaments Lark
 — larrylark

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