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The Cure
Rull

Ply me with kisses,
 1
comfort me with warm embraces
 2
for I am sick with love.
 3
Let your hands caress,
 4
your fingers tease away this fever
 5
simmering inside me.
 6
Soothe me with the soft murmurings
 7
of your sweet voice
 8
for I ache with desire
 9
and burn with longing.
 10
Let your lips be the healing balm
 11
upon my swollen need,
 12
your tongue the stimulant
 13
that induces the flow
 14
and your body the antidote
 15
that effects the cure.
 16

16 Feb 06

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  Beautiful, When can i see the next chapter.
Talk about sensual.

encore, encore
 — horolaggia

very cool; i think the last "effects" should be affects, but i liked it alot; Good use of imagry.
 — ljump12

the end was the only shortcoming... nice work!
 — aforbing

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