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16 Feb 06
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THIS IS NOT A POEM. SUGGEST YOU GO FIND AN AVANTE GARDE ART SITE.
i repeat, haha.
not the best, but better than some.
well i love it
says a whole lot more then some of the poetry I see posted here
It is not a poem.
Not poetry but I still liked it.
the gold medal for the new low goes to Y
are you a savant-e?
oh baby when my w and your y get together its on!!!
believe me youre on your own .
right about that!! i can get this party started on my own!!
LOLOL good. Just close your blinds and shut your mouth.
( ! ) &nbs p; - you with your thong off
nah blinds open, im a bit of an exhibitionist, why be an ass and keep the party to yourself??
the above exhibitionist can be reached at 2124035044 ask for moana
WELL PARDON ME FOR TRYING TO SERVICE ALL OF MANHATTAN!!!!!
ummmmmmm more words please!!!!
what moana shoulda said at the fantasy date--"arivderci molto stupid-o ciao!!!" hahahaha
i feel so blessed to have stumbled upon this.
For God's sake, what is wrong with you?
no really, people are starting to get really nasty. and too many unknowns. and the poem is more like..well, i dont know, definatly not like a poem!
lol one penis?
put your thong back on ghettobutt
This made me smile, thankyou.
PORN for the cheap person
i like it. so sue me.
What is this shit??Can someone please decode thong hieroglyphics as displayed above??
That one penis must be exhausted amongst all those vaginas!!
lolololol. effortless retardation.
who says men dont wear thongs? homo orgy Aiigght
dedicated to slobogonad milosevic
I like the finish on the note of wideload buttcrack.
Grow up y'all. You'd think you'd never seen real buttocks.
cut the crap reese!!!
a tour de force!!! riveting!!! scintillating!
Haw, haw, haw :D
Great for a smile..
well, this is a lot suckier than it was last time i saw it.
This may be 'funny' or give people 'laughs,' but sorry to say: IT'S NOT POETRY.
I know I left comment here previously which didn't seem to post...but the proper way to "draw" a thong would be ( Y ) that is if the thong be worn. As it is as this being a poem though...no, it's not. it's cute and I suppose it was fun to draw up, but it's not poetry.
Y Y Y do I lurvisual poems so much. I guess its cus I'm obsessed with ordinance survey maps where you can spread a detailed map out of part of the world ,marvel at its pretty calligraphy yet it don't tell you a thing exept how to get from A to B and how to avoid your thong sweating up while sat on top of a moumtain reading girlie mags on a hot summers day.
still a 10
wow! it looks to me that you have a whole family wearing thongs. lol
.....i wonder who they are supposed to be??.....
could this be some type of poem in alien?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! get a life, seriously
The more I see this, the funnier it gets, now that I am somewhat more familiar with thongs...haha
i think you need to find a new hobby.
Wow. You're retarded. It's not even funny.
I don't really get it, but it is original. It isn't a poem.
I love shit like this. Call it arty, avant garde, etc. Whatever it is, it's invoked a reaction from the people, and that's more than a lot of poetry on this website does. It's verse in complete punk style.
This is not a pipe.
I'll just give you a 1, you deserve one!
A lot of fun, fits well with my definition of poetry
oops/ forgot the quotes
; &nbs p; &nb sp; &n bsp; & nbsp;   ; &nbs p; &nb sp; Pio
I like it.
It's...whimsical. And I agree with mixtapeboy. Very punk rock in a way.
Way to fuck with the entire site without being overly offensive.
I don't understand the P, guys. Someone explain the P to me. Please.
jcameron! it is a tongue! OBVIOUSLY.
how many do you need for an orgy?
o my hilarious
interesting and quite cute.
Even I didn't write this one
i don't get it
ass is kool
Y YYY did I bother to read (?) this?
everbody has regret after the temptation of ass
still turns me on
Thanks again, Random! I needed a good laugh
i think i've read/seen this before, hehe.
It is now Sept, 08. I still remember this poemparty! It's great!
i m drunk its kool