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like pudding rice
unknown

to embrace sky and stars
 1
like pudding rice
 2
(does she need to give them back?)
 3
 
 
one inactive, alive overarching aluminum mind.
 4
 
 
looking for them
 5
a hundred are gone, will be more
 6
(write it over plasma incomplete)
 7
 
 
tangerine eyes of pudding rice
 8
overarching aluminum.
 9

8 Aug 03

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line 4 is so devo. this truly is my wildlife treasury!
 — onklcrispy

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