| American Chop Suey
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thomastimm
| 's father | 1 |
offended you | 2 |
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you were a kid | 3 |
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today you | 4 |
imagine | 5 |
you have | 6 |
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another | 7 |
disorder | 8 |
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undiagnosed | 9 |
_and you're | 10 |
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still thinking | 11 |
that you know | 12 |
something | 13 |
that they | 14 |
don't | 15 |
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you're always | 16 |
wrong | 17 |
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21 Feb 06 |
Rated 9 (8.3) by 1 users.
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Its those perceived greivances that derive from the mind predisposition and suseptibilities and that grow into negatives or in extreme cases psychosis. You describe that process succinctly.
— larrylark
I agree with Larry - astute observation.
— wendz
i really love the last two stanzas. nice poem.
— sodapop
you're always
wong
?
no?
anyway. i read it that way.
Perversimonia
— unknown
are you sure your not dat silly wabbit woger?
wong indeed
not
— unknown
hey =)
some of the punc confused me a little (is it perhaps refering to a specific psychological disorder?) nice and succinct.
— Ink_drinker
yes, teeth and nails. gorgeous poem. ( I don't understand the_(line 10). It smudges this for me, otherwise excellent. It provokes many questions, and that's why I love to read good poetry. Thanks.
Grace
— borntodance
Thank you for your comments.
— unknown
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