| lazarus
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spaces
| i only stumble into breath. | 1 |
inked deep within some | 2 |
crevice of a character, | 3 |
i insist there lies | 4 |
some shadow rid of death. | 5 |
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beauty, breathing still | 6 |
within this carcass -- | 7 |
a brightly glorious radiance | 8 |
that beats & bleeds with | 9 |
the fervor of any black-jawed | 10 |
beast i feed with pity. | 11 |
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lithe thing sprawled | 12 |
boneless in my chest, | 13 |
once-broken blade lit | 14 |
fiery bright and tempered | 15 |
evenly at her own behest. | 16 |
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23 Feb 06 |
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— unknown
barrabas
so dude like there this like um roman
so im like yo step it
and hes like oh no you did not
so like is totaly slaughtered him
and the other zelots are all, gnarly
and then there were like more romans
and im all wow dude romans dude wow romans wow romans dude wow dude wow
so then im like all arrested and its like so not righteous
so aviaters like "yo dudes so heres the deal
like you killed people and you preached stuff"
so like i look around and its my dawg jc
im like whats up and hes like dude i cured a blind man so like the sanhedrin be hating now
so like theres a crowd and aviaters like
who gonna die
not cool man not cool
but the crowds all like free me kill him
so im like sweet later dude
then i like went and killed a roman
and like the zealots are all like, righteous
then i got like arrested
and im like all not cool dude
and yo jcs dead and stuff now
so this is like major boner dude
wipe out
see i can write bible shit too.
— TheO1dCrow
i like it, esp. 10-11
— unknown
this has absolutely nothing whatsoever to do with the bible. cultural icons can be like, appropriated & stuff. dumbass.
— spaces
ok, so 'dumbass' might have been a little childish -- but the crow comment irked me.
— spaces
Wow, a semblance of a rhyme scheme (or something akin thereof).
This is one of those beautiful ones. Well-formulated lines of words.
The concept itself is also... well, maybe beautiful isn't the appropriate word, but it's something close.
— silentscream
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