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Justified blunt-ride
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      tree limbs            |            street signs
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      pace and reach closer
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      lights bounce feet from bloodshot eyes.
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      from inside          |               to outside
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      to the edge of a shoulder
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      nothing to worry we're just getting high.
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A sarcastic acknowledgment of the obvious stupidities of going on 'blunt rides'

which reminds me, time for a 'bone cruz'

get high. good night.

26 Feb 06


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blunt-rides are awesome.
 — unknown

right on

:::flicks bic:::
 — Brando_O

pf, stoners

thanks though
 — Backspace

Gooooooooooooooodniiiiiiiiight -_-
 — Brando_O

i'd like to do this right now
 — thefatwon
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