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Disappointments are self-imposed, too.

In the circus of revelry,	1
wings mourn	2

and icarus--	3
is bound to drown	4
when the only place from up is	5







down.	6

27 Feb 06

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i like the subtlety of the rhyme
i like the allusion, even if it is used often
i like the idea of a revelry filled circus

in general, i like this
— ileviyou

try spelling disappointments correctly. Then we'll see about the poem
— unknown

thanks, unknown. lol
— zackrabbit

Interesting.
— unknown

clever.
— listen

Really excellent and original
— larrylark

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