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monkey runs.
OKcomputer

poem:
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monkey runs
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ebbed
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along my bed
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in red shorts
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with red threads.
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monkey minimalist,
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            expressionist
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and likewise denying,
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reds and blues and
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quiet hues
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purging sky
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and purging sky.
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lousy
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caffeined
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coffee-head;
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endless bitter
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and better-sullen;
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lonely body
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stoning soul.
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28 Feb 06

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THESE WORDS ARE BEAUTIFUL, TOGETHER,

SEPARATE THEY ARE ONLY WORDS

I AM GLAD THEY FOUND EACH OTHER
 — noodleman

wow.
and to repeat myself:
wow.
 — midare

Reminds me of a friend of mine.  Yah...  a lot
 — Infrangible

This is so well put togehter. A great poem read out loud
 — larrylark

What! Haha this changed.  I take back my previous comment.
 — Infrangible

200 BJ's each. That's what. :O
 — OKcomputer

OH face!
 — OKcomputer

I just finished giving a BJ in my profile pictures.
 — OKcomputer

i hate the word soul in poetry
it is so (cringes shoulders) yuck.
 — unknown

I have never tried recapitation.
 — OKcomputer

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