Comments:
pretty. i don't know why, but i do like it. (;
cute.
~duckie
— ducktape
maybe it's because of the word "fluffles." lol. yay.
— ducktape
difficult to read. but fluffles is a good word. gives an otherwise flat poem oomph.
— bettalpha
i agree with the others, this is so pretty!
i like the way the words look like clouds and the second line fades away.
perfectly touching!
— sparrow
really cool title, really cool layout, really cool words! nice! here comes the sun!
— starr
I'd change it to:
In the ruffles of my sky, etc, just for a smoother read.
Either way, cute.
— Isabelle5
Yeah, what Isabelle said
— Kauf
i like how it's written more than what its about.
— majan
I love the word Fluffles, what a fun word and so descriptive of clouds. Look how I changed my mind from my first comment months ago.
— Isabelle5
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